Elaine’s visit to Oakfield Junior School, Fetcham, Surrey

Planning a Charlie Farley story of their own using the Story Mountain Plan

 VENUE: Oakfield Junior school Fetcham, Surrey

AUDIENCE: Y3, Y4, Y5 in their classrooms, two classes per year. Y6 classes together in Hall with clipboards, paper, empty story mountain plan and pencils.

MEDIA: Video of real dogs and PowerPoint on memory stick connected to classroom desktop and monitor

LENGTH of SESSIONS: 40 mins each class

CONTENT: For each of Y3,Y4,Y5 in Classrooms and Y6 in Hall.

  • Background to how I came to write stories starting from when I was their age!

  • Team work to produce a book - Author, Illustrator, Publisher

  • The process of writing a story, showing my scribblings, communication between the Author and Illustrator as the pictures build up to the final version, drafting, re-drafting etc.

  • Video of the real dogs showing aspects of them that are related in the stories

  • Live story telling of one of my books including questions before, during and after to explore the story and the theme.

  • Any questions for me?

  • Writing task, structuring their own story about Charlie Farley and Jasper using the 5 part Story Mountain plan after having seen example from the book I read to them.

  • Class teachers carried on the stories after I had left.

SCHOOL’S PREPARATION and SUPPORT agreed in return for no charge for visit:

  • A copy of each of Elaine’s published Charlie Farley books bought for the school

  • Agreed Story Mountain plan sheets printed off for each class after discussion about content with Elaine

  • Email letter to parents the week before, on the day as a reminder and after with details of author’s visit with details about pre-ordering books before visit or buying books at Home Time on the day. Elaine’s web site given so parents can have a look before or after the day. Books kept after Elaine’s visit for 1 week in case any parents had missed getting them.

  • Staff and Children reviews and photos sent to Elaine afterwards

What the Staff and Children said about the visit!

TEACHERS

Yr 3 - Such a well organised workshop. Elaine was great with the children, so calm and listened to each child so well.

Yr 4 - Loved the meaning behind each books and how Elaine's own pets and grandchildren are the inspiration for her stories

Yr 5 - Such an informative workshop with lovely stories. Elaine had great behaviour management with the pupils

Yr 6 - Loved watching the video of Elaine's dogs at the start of the workshop and seeing how this inspires her stories

Reviews from Children

Pupil 1 - I found the illustrations fascinating and loved seeing how Elaine turns her notes into a story

Pupil 2 - I think this might be my best story yet that I have planned from Elaine's story